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original Story: Dawn
Aug. 30th, 2013 07:41 pmTranslated story from back back in the days, Spanish/basic version HERE
it had to be translated and edited because one day will be part of the back-story of the reign at east, the place where King Marek comes from, it's gonna be the third installment for the Szarabasjka Story.
Just let me know what you think...
In a world faraway, ruled by kings, from the time the world was young and had no experience, under the same star two babies were born.
At north of the star a boy was born, he was a child of the powerful night, with a will forged with fire, at the south a girl, she was like a swift dawn with the strenght of a storm.
Both carried the weight of a crown on their heads, and the kingdoms were quite different, north only heard the clang of blacksmiths, swords and shield and armors all day, everything was iron and precious stones.
South heard laughter and calm, animals and lands full of richness, different yes, but both babies had love and care.
Time passed until the star came back over the same land, both babies were grown ups now, He was an astonishing warrior, he lost his mother and his father spoiled him, because he was everything he had left.
She was the leader of her people, just and kind, She lost her mother, and her father treasured more than any jewel because she was precious to him.
The boy fought in wars and he always won, in his entire life he never heard a NO, he had no idea how it felt to lose, and he was arrogant.
The girl ruled sometimes, even over her father, she had the wisdom of the elders and a smile you could never say no to, and she was proud.
( read more about the star, the princess and the prince )
I'll be greatly thankful for any opinion, idea, thought or suggestion on this story.
it had to be translated and edited because one day will be part of the back-story of the reign at east, the place where King Marek comes from, it's gonna be the third installment for the Szarabasjka Story.
Just let me know what you think...
In a world faraway, ruled by kings, from the time the world was young and had no experience, under the same star two babies were born.
At north of the star a boy was born, he was a child of the powerful night, with a will forged with fire, at the south a girl, she was like a swift dawn with the strenght of a storm.
Both carried the weight of a crown on their heads, and the kingdoms were quite different, north only heard the clang of blacksmiths, swords and shield and armors all day, everything was iron and precious stones.
South heard laughter and calm, animals and lands full of richness, different yes, but both babies had love and care.
Time passed until the star came back over the same land, both babies were grown ups now, He was an astonishing warrior, he lost his mother and his father spoiled him, because he was everything he had left.
She was the leader of her people, just and kind, She lost her mother, and her father treasured more than any jewel because she was precious to him.
The boy fought in wars and he always won, in his entire life he never heard a NO, he had no idea how it felt to lose, and he was arrogant.
The girl ruled sometimes, even over her father, she had the wisdom of the elders and a smile you could never say no to, and she was proud.
( read more about the star, the princess and the prince )
I'll be greatly thankful for any opinion, idea, thought or suggestion on this story.
